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w a question taboon professional writing or easy? example:
pro; i opened my eyes from the harsh rays of the hot sun
easy; i woke up
andd do u think im going too fast?
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i woke up from bed feeling happy. i remembered that i had to go out with brandon . yaay;p
*Brrng Brnng* Unknown Caller
who could that be? i answered
Me; aloo
Voice; Can you please talk english? *with a hint of sarcasm*
my heart started beating faster, it was brandon
me; umm. hello?
brandon; heeey babe
i giggled. he still remembers<3
brandon; woaah. i'm in heaven
i blushed. ashwaa he can't see me
brandon; stopp blushing babe i can feel it
me; can you please stop calling me that?
brandon; no babe i wont
he just did that to piss me off
brandon; soo anyways im outside your house
me; WHAT?
brandon; uuh i told you yesterday im picking you up at 8
me; ooh shoot, i forgot to change
brandon; number one; its okay i can wait you know. number two; why did u say shoot, can't you just say sh*t? number three; arent you gonna invite me in?
me; uuhh i dnt swear and u could ring the bell and the maid will open the door for you
brandon; kaay byee
i shut the phone and rushed to the dressing room to find something to put on. i settled for high waisted pants and a plain cotton shirt.
i was about to change when my door swung open
me; :O . im gonna change you know
brandon; i dont mind you changing infront of me
me; :O :O excuse me??? WELL I MIND!! who let you in my room anyways
brandon; the maid led me into your room. And i'm gonna be ur husband in two days so u should get used to us sharing the same room.
i remembered that my wedding is coming so soon, i dont wanna get married!
brandon; what happened to you? why is your face so yellow?
me; umm nothing...
*he sensed the sorrow in my voice*
brandon; whats wrong?
me; i just.... im not ready to get married yet
brandon; i know..i know.. i feel the same way... just try to forget about it since our parents planned all the wedding details including ur dress, you dont hve to worry about it. just try to forget about okaay?;p and after the marriage we'll just be friends so no pressure alright?..... come on .. go change and i'll wait for you over here.
woow, he made me smile, atleast my husband is not a jerk. but i was a little sad about the friend part, even
though i wouldve said that too. i quickly changed and came out. we got into the car.
brandon; soo where do you wana go?me; umm i dont know
brandon; how about early birds?
me; suree
brandon;how about johnny rockets?
me; sure
brandon; how about the crepe factory?
me; suure
brandon; ohhh comee on! soo everything is alright with you... you can give your opinion you know, im not a monster.
me; hehehe, umm the crepe factory sounds good
we went to the avenues and got to the restaurant .
brandon; i know were just friends, but we gotta act like a real couple. hold my hands.
i hesitated at first, but then he grabbed my hand, placed it in his palms and squeezed it.
ahhh... it felt soo right
the waiter came, took our orders, and brought the food.
we were eating silently, and brandon suddenly burst out laughiing!!
me; what?
brandon; are you kidding me?this is the size of your bites? an insect eats more than you
*el9araa7a im on a life long diet bs i didnt wanna tell him*
me; im not hungry
brandon; heeyy you gotta eat, i dont want an anorexic wife.
just then tears silently started rolling down my cheeks
brandon; uuh marryamm? meemzz? uuh did i say something, comee on please stop crying. he started rubbing my palms, come on, life isnt worth it ... pleaasee stoopp. come on tell me whats wrongg... im sorry if i said something? ur not anorexic im sorry, i didnt mean it
he looked scared, maskeen khara3taa
me; uuh no thaats okaay nothings wrong, im sorry
brandon ; ( with a little anger in his voice) comee on! you should seriously stop lying to me. i wont hurt yoou! why wont you just tell me the truth??
me; you wanna know what's wrong ? you told me to forget about getting married and you keep reminding me of it! ( my voice was slightly loud)
brandon was getting angry and his voice was loud ;; ooh! well you keep reminding me that.... ( he noticed that his voice was loud so he just slapped a 20 KD on the table, grabbed my arm and started dragging me towards the car
**we got in the car**
brandon ( his face was red) ; WELL YOU JUST KEEP REMINDING ME THAT MY SOON-TO-BE WIFE CRIES WHENEVER SHE REMEMBERS THAT SHE'S GONNA SPEND THE REST OF HER LIFE WITH ME. YOU KNOW MY EX GIRLFRIENDS WOULD DIE FOR THAT DAY AND YOU HATE IT? NOBODY HAS EVER REJECTED ME!!
* that really pissed me off*
me; FIRST OF ALL IM NOT YOUR GIRLFRIEND OKAAY?? AND SECOND IM NOT TOO FLATTERED EITHER THAT YOU HAVE DATED DOZENS OF GIRLS . ANNDD THIRD, WHY IS THIS ALL ABOUT YOUR EGOO?? JUSSST BECAAUSEE YOOUR HOOT ANDD.....
i quickly stopped my self,, oohh godd i cant believe i actually said thaat
brandon; WELL THAAT BECAUSEE YOUR THE ONLY GIRL THAT I ACTUALLY LIKEED!!
anndd he quickly stopped himself
thaat was soo sweett ...... my stomach started doing somersaults!!
me *shy* : do you really like me?
brandon;God i can't believe i actually said that, *sigh* yeaah, and that was weird for me to admit. my ego is usually too big for that. *smile*........ do you think i'm "hot"? *devilish smirk*
me; .....
brandon; come on just saay it
me; .....
brandon; i just answered your question, why dont you answer mine?
me; yees :$ :$ :$
brandon; im whaat????
me; shut up!.......err brandon..were just friends okaay.. nothing more?
brandon; whateever...;p
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